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by DaHeckIzDat
February 3rd, 2018, 11:45 pm
Forum: Other Media
Topic: Book Summary Help?
Replies: 31
Views: 554

Re: Book Summary Help?

If anyone's interested, here's a little sneak peek. Chapter One Water sloshed underneath Toke's feet as the boat crept sluggishly up the crowded canal. With an agitated sigh, he sat back on the tiny bench and let his fingers trail through the water, glancing downward when an orange scaled koppafish ...
by DaHeckIzDat
February 3rd, 2018, 1:06 pm
Forum: Review Feedback
Topic: 2018/2/3: Atari 7800: Super Circus AtariAge, Bentley Bear's Crystal Quest
Replies: 5
Views: 267

Re: 2018/2/3: Atari 7800: Super Circus AtariAge, Bentley Bear's Crystal Quest

"When I finally mastered the controls, it began to grow on me. I like the way the difficulty ramps up and gradually introduces new enemies. The game has endless continues so you can practice those tricky levels until you get it right."

We'll make a Dark Souls fan out of you yet, Critic!
by DaHeckIzDat
February 2nd, 2018, 7:17 pm
Forum: Other Media
Topic: Book Summary Help?
Replies: 31
Views: 554

Re: Book Summary Help?

There's only one detail that gives me pause, which is Vlangur; the protagonists are targeted by a "nationwide manhunt" and hide in a "neighboring country", but of these two countries, only one gets named, which raises the distracting question of what the other's called. Either n...
by DaHeckIzDat
February 2nd, 2018, 6:19 pm
Forum: Other Media
Topic: Book Summary Help?
Replies: 31
Views: 554

Re: Book Summary Help?

Although, I still want to work the title into the book somewhere, so maybe One year after the infamous Juryokine, Toke Gnasher, saved Sorakine city...
by DaHeckIzDat
February 2nd, 2018, 5:03 pm
Forum: Other Media
Topic: Book Summary Help?
Replies: 31
Views: 554

Re: Book Summary Help?

All right, let me see what else I can come up with... One year after Toke Gnasher saved the city of Sorakines from his fallen hero, Professor Navras, he and Zashiel are still on the run from a nationwide manhunt. Dubbed a terrorist by his own people, and an unholy monster by Zashiel's, the two of th...
by DaHeckIzDat
February 2nd, 2018, 10:10 am
Forum: Other Media
Topic: Book Summary Help?
Replies: 31
Views: 554

Re: Book Summary Help?

As for getting rid of the made up words, I'm not sure that would work either. The response has been completely unanimous. Of course it would work. Let's try it... Are you actually interested in improving this blurb or even changing anything about it? Why did you ask for help if you aren't going to ...
by DaHeckIzDat
February 1st, 2018, 10:16 pm
Forum: Other Media
Topic: Book Summary Help?
Replies: 31
Views: 554

Re: Book Summary Help?

Is Toke supposed to be one or two syllables? One. It's pronounced like it looks. His name is Cassitoka, but he shortened it to Toke because he thinks it sounds like a girl's name. As for getting rid of the made up words, I'm not sure that would work either. Let's try it... They say no good deed goe...
by DaHeckIzDat
January 31st, 2018, 4:07 pm
Forum: Modern Gaming
Topic: This months's free PS+ games
Replies: 14
Views: 636

Re: This months's free PS+ games

Not as good as last month, but Rime looks good. I've considered it a couple times when it was on sale. Yeah, it seems like they've got a pattern going. One month of good games, one month of meh. I got Metal Gear Solid: Phantom Pain, Just Cause 3, and The Amnesia Collection all from those good months.
by DaHeckIzDat
January 31st, 2018, 12:21 pm
Forum: Modern Gaming
Topic: This months's free PS+ games
Replies: 14
Views: 636

Re: This months's free PS+ games

I take it back! Next month's free games just got announced. PS4: - Knack (meh) - Rime (puzzle game that looks kinda Ico/Shadow of the Colossus-ish in terms of atmosphere. Will probably check it out) - Grand Kingdom (turn based strategy rpg, looks kind of similar to Advance Wars. Might check out.) PS...
by DaHeckIzDat
January 31st, 2018, 11:21 am
Forum: Modern Gaming
Topic: This months's free PS+ games
Replies: 14
Views: 636

Re: This months's free PS+ games

Sony hasn't announced what February's free games will be, but they have announced that anyone who signs up for PS+ in February will get a free copy of Far Cry 4. This only applies to people who do not have an account already, which is pretty bogus IMO.

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