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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby VideoGameCritic » March 31st, 2017, 4:35 pm

Thanks for looking out guys! Fixing these typos now.

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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby Shepy » June 7th, 2017, 2:48 pm

A few recommendations for some Switch reviews.

Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
- meter adds a lot suspense -> meter adds a lot of suspense
- everyday after school -> every day after school

Mario Kart 8 Deluxe
- criss-crossing -> crisscrossing

Puyo Puyo Tetris
- punctuatation -> punctuation
- compete for high score -> compete for a high score
- likeable -> likable

Super Bomberman R
- I'm been -> I've been
- poorly-designed -> poorly designed

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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby VideoGameCritic » June 7th, 2017, 5:27 pm

Shepy,
Thanks so much for letting me know about these. I just applied the corrections.
Keep them coming.
Thanks

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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby Shepy » July 12th, 2017, 10:06 am

More suggestions.

Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
- is massive game -> is a massive game

Ultra Street Fighter II
- was because it was download-only -> was that it was download-only
- sounds a little less edgy -> sound a little less edgy

Dead Rising 3
- eventually you team -> eventually your team

Doom
- make me woosy -> make me woozy

Gears of War 4
- terminator-style -> Terminator-style
- as it is game around the -> as it is the game around the

Halo 5: Guardians
- Split-screen coop - Split-screen co-op

Killer Instinct
- remastered to sound more edgy -> remastered to sound edgier
- complete with a kraken -> complete with a Kraken

Raiden V
- I feels like a ham-fisted -> It feels like a ham-fisted
- along with date -> along with the date

Rise of the Tomb Raider
- The jumping and climbing is -> The jumping and climbing are
- Developers Crystal Dynamics are taking things way too seriously -> Developer Crystal Dynamics is taking things way too seriously

Rory McIlroy PGA Tour
-The analog swing is default -> The analog swing is the default

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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby Shepy » July 12th, 2017, 10:24 am

Also, you missed the # of players for Mario Kart 8 Deluxe :).

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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby VideoGameCritic » July 13th, 2017, 5:08 pm

Excellent feedback guys. I applied most of those fixes. Thank you!

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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby Maks » August 25th, 2017, 12:45 am

GBA Mario Kart Super Circuit it says "you can even shared your 'ghosts' with friends."

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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby VideoGameCritic » August 27th, 2017, 2:22 pm

Thanks for looking out Maks.
I think I'm up to date now.

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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby Maks » September 16th, 2017, 6:17 pm

SNES Winter Extreme Skiing and blah blah, it says "unorthadox."

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Re: Return of the Typo Thread!

Postby Robotrek » September 17th, 2017, 6:29 pm

In your Pinball Arcade review on PS4, you incorrectly title "Medieval Madness" as "Medieval Mayhem".


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