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Postby VideoGameCritic » October 21st, 2014, 9:07 pm

Thanks guys!  I should be all caught up now.  Feels good!

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Postby Verm1 » November 12th, 2014, 7:13 am

Little typo in Sonic Advance in the Gameboy Advance reviews; 'the graphics is Sonic Advance...'

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Postby Wallyworld1 » November 30th, 2014, 1:02 pm

In the PS1 Ridge Racer 2 review. You typed "the controls haven't changed but the tracks tend to me more narrow." I believe you meant "the tracks tend to be more narrow."

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Postby Orion1 » November 30th, 2014, 2:54 pm

Something is wrong with the first sentence of the Toy Commander review:  "Toy Commander that it's become a 'cult classic' of sorts."

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Postby VideoGameCritic » December 2nd, 2014, 8:02 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys.  I think I'm all caught up.

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Postby Teddybear1 » December 5th, 2014, 6:53 am

Wait - one more!  :-)

Your Lock N Chase review for Intellivision states that there are three policemen chasing you.  I wish......it would make it a bit easier.  There are four.

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Postby VideoGameCritic » December 7th, 2014, 11:30 am

Didn't go back to verify, but I'll take your word for it!

Fixed!

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Postby gleebergloben1 » December 7th, 2014, 6:22 pm

In the 12/4 review of Final Zone II (line 1):
You can tell this one is going to ridiculous from the title alone, ... (should be "going to be")

Also in Final Zone II (line 3):
If CD's can hold so much data, so why these cut scenes displayed.... ("so" should be deleted)

In Valis IV (lines 11-12):
..., you'll unleash your magic which envelopes the screen. (should be "envelops")

In the 11/29 review of Ridge Racer (line 10):
..., and cruise pass scenic beach resorts. (should be "past")

Also in Ridge Racer (4th line from the bottom):
The game saves best time trial times.... (not sure if this is a typo, but maybe the 1st "time" can be deleted)

In ESPN Extreme Games (line 6):
..., and there's nothing more satisfying that the sound of a skateboarder ... (should be "than")

In the 11/26 review of Subterranea:
I also noticed an pixelated pattern... (should be "a")

In the 11/23 review of Bayonetta (line 7):
..... causing gold coins spring forth ..... (should be "to spring")

In the 11/23 review of Sonic Boom: Rise of Lyric (line 3):
According to my friend Scott says Sega "should have let the hedgehog die...." (should be "According to my friend Scott, Sega "should have...." or "My friend Scott says Sega "should have..."

Also In Sonic Boom (3rd line from the bottom):
..., but the camera doesn't seem to be playing same game. (should be "the same game")


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Postby VideoGameCritic » December 7th, 2014, 7:16 pm

Thanks gleeber!  I feels really good to "clean up" all those reviews.

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Postby goldenband1 » December 13th, 2014, 5:25 pm

New one: in the Milon's Secret Castle review, "unorthodox" is spelled incorrectly.


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