Me again back for round 2...up to bat...the Atari 2600!
3D Tic-Tac-Toe
*Remove comma in ....played like normal Tic-Tac-Toe, but....it should be played like normal Tic-Tac-Toe but...
50 Shades of Grey
*Add Comma -Upon further inspection
, the game is....
*items like a rope...or the rope...may be fine how it is...just sounds weird to me
Adventure
* Change The castles look superb, and... to The castles look superb and
* Change I love how, after a dragon eats you,... to I love how after a dragon eats you,
Air-Sea Battle
*Add comma... On the surface, there's just a bunch....
*Add comma...Blue gradient skyline, however...
*Remove comma... boat or plane because...
Airlock
*Add comma... In Airlock, you must...
Alien
*Remove comma...those in the movie but instead...
Amidar
*saddest-looking should be saddest looking
*Add Comma ...off the corner squares, you can turn
Aquaventure
*Add comma...In each stage, you'll descend...
Armor Ambush
*Add Commas... you down, but, in general, the tanks move...
Artillery Duel
*Remove comma double-ender cartridge because
Asterix (Europe)
*May want to consider changing adaption to adoption in the first sentence.
Asteroids
*Makes should be make in ...patterns which make them...because of subject-verb agreement and all that jazz
Astroblast
*provides AN auto-fire capability
Atari Video Cube
*add comma...very good, however...
Atlantis
*add comma One in the middle, and one....
*A historical perspective NOT an historical perspective.
Hope these help.
I'll do more later.