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"It wasn't a best-seller however Grand Theft Auto 3 gave the series its third dimension."
Probably was intended to read:
"It wasn't a best-seller, however, until Grand Theft Auto 3 gave the series its third dimension."
Things I suggest adding to the text are enclosed by “|”, and the brackets are sugestions for taking something out of the text.
Airlock for 2600: “... instead |of| water gradually filling ...”
Amidar for 2600: “This has got to be the saddest looking video-game gorilla[s] ever” / This game also needs a chicken icon.
Bermuda Triangle for 2600: “The real danger|s| are laser beams ...” / “While returning items to the surface should you net 600 points ...” This sentence seems to need a comma after “surface” or some other adjustment.
Blackjack for the 2600: “... which also contain|s| Blackjack.”
Bumper Bash for the 2600: “Not bad|,| but not the best.”