A small typo..

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bigllama99

A small typo..

Postby bigllama99 » December 12th, 2008, 12:49 am

In the first sentence of games section in the Game Cube console review, it says,

"..., the Gamecube was often left out in the cold as hit titles like Silent Hill 2 and Grand Theft Auto 4 were released for the PS2 and Xbox."

I think you mean Grand Theft Auto 3?

NixonTech2071

A small typo..

Postby NixonTech2071 » December 12th, 2008, 5:53 pm

Alot of extremely busy people make mistakes, even when typing up reviews.

Just saying.

bigllama99

A small typo..

Postby bigllama99 » December 12th, 2008, 8:52 pm

[QUOTE=NixonTech2071]Alot of extremely busy people make mistakes, even when typing up reviews.

Just saying.
[/QUOTE]

yes, and that's why we have to help correct them. 

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A small typo..

Postby VideoGameCritic » December 13th, 2008, 11:59 am

Thanks - I will fix that.

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A small typo..

Postby Verm1 » December 14th, 2008, 5:25 pm

Speaking of typo's.

I was just reading the critics review of Red Steel for the Wii:

"The action begin's with the hi-jacking on your hottie Asian fiance in a lavish hotel"

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A small typo..

Postby VideoGameCritic » December 14th, 2008, 11:43 pm

Yikes, that Red Steel one was pretty bad.

Let's keep these typo reports coming!


bigllama99

A small typo..

Postby bigllama99 » December 15th, 2008, 1:08 am

another small one:

The last part of the first sentence in your Xbox 360 Bioshock review.

"this amazing story-driven epic may alter [U][B]you[/B][/U]perspective"

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A small typo..

Postby Funkmaster V » December 15th, 2008, 11:05 am

On Wii Rubik's cube game I think you meant Soothing music instead of Smoothing music


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A small typo..

Postby VideoGameCritic » December 15th, 2008, 10:50 pm

Well played gentlemen!

I fixed those, but what other ones can you find?

Or were they the last two? 


bigllama99

A small typo..

Postby bigllama99 » December 16th, 2008, 12:04 am

Found another in the Wii Fit Review:

Sort of near the end of the review, "Wii Fit may provide a less vigorous that weights or a treadmill, but the entertainment value makes it easy to stick to your regimen."

I think you mean 'than' instead of 'that'.


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